even that day woke up late..went to school in a hurry and the world around me was in slow motion as soon as i looked at that girl...Naina...woooo..what a girl..i knew no one of friends is going to like that girl ..dont even i if it would have been some other day..i guess..but it was not..i dont know what i liked in her..she was in 8th i was in 12..4 year gap..guys will call it a baby sitting..lol..but i was helpless...we were standing near the entrance..yeah we had reached SAI(sports authority of India)...how?...i dont know..i was lost somewhere..yeah so were standing near the entrance..what a feeling it was..u can imagine only if u ever fall in love ..
plz comment so i can write more,...
hey...u made a nice start...continue ur story...m eager to know it...u wont believe i've also fallen in luv....
ReplyDeletehmm...nice work akash!! u can allways improvise :)i wud lov 2 knw more abt ur instances..
ReplyDeletethnx frnds....i will continue it..:)
ReplyDeletehey yaar it's really gr8..waiting to know wht happened then...really yaar u hv a gr8 writing skill..good work..keep it up...-purnima
ReplyDeletegud goin akash........bt who iz dia naina vo deshpandey kya......??
ReplyDeleteanywayz age ki story mughe thori thori pata hai bt phir bhi apni story puri kar....starting aachi hai......:-)
abhinav.....
ty...........
ReplyDeletehey aakash i normally hate reading bt tis 1 ws gud start 4r me n u !!!!!!!!!! me 4r readng n u 4r wr8ng n wud definately read u further..............shik here
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ReplyDeleteit aws awesum , an awesum start to the story...I wud like to know that is this real or u r just imagining..I wouuld also like to read further part..I appreciate ur work.!!..good going..Keep it up :D
Siddharth......
ty..n yeah itz vry close to real one...
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